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Post by Bramblefur on Nov 11, 2008 22:12:09 GMT -5
Name:Fogsky Alliance:BushClan Rank:Leader Age:3 Years Old Gender:Tom Appearance:Personality:He is very mysterious at times. He is a light-hearted tom with a gentle soul. His strict but fair to his clan when he gives punishment and orders. He is also very outgoing(this means he knows the maze so well he might as well do it in his sleep). History:He was born 3 years ago to a beautiful calico queen named Paintedfur and a tom named Slashedpelt. As a kit he was very spunky and care-free. He loved to play and listen to tales from the elders. When he became an apprentice he was very stubborn and determined with his training. He found battle training hard but was an amazing hunter. But he soon got the hang of battle skills and became a great fighter. When he became a warrior it was a moon before the event happened, he had been named Fogsky. When the deputy and leader died of illness he was chosen by StarClan to be the next leader. When they reached the new land he was already leader but had been only given three lives for the journey there. He trusts what StarClan says and hopes that SkyClan will watch them closely out of love and protection.
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Post by Emberheart on Nov 12, 2008 7:40:18 GMT -5
It's good. ^^ The only problem is his subfix should be 'Sky' instead of 'Star'. Since unless you want to play Bushstar he's technically supposed to have died on the way here or shortly after. If that's alright. 83
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Post by Bramblefur on Nov 12, 2008 18:56:25 GMT -5
I just fixed it. the "star" surname is a force of habit now.
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Post by Emberheart on Nov 13, 2008 15:21:17 GMT -5
I can sympathize. XD Ty for fixing~ Accepted! ;D
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